What is immediately noticeable from this image is how little depth it has, this is due to very little effort in shading. The focal point appears to be the trees and seats, which when compared with the very sparsely detailed door windows, leaves the image a little unbalanced. There is good line work on the curves of the roof, but again more care could have been taken to ensure the lines are equally spaced apart, and tidier in general. The ellipses are slightly unparalleled and could have used better plotting by the artist. More time spent adding some weight to the lines would have equalled a much more vivid piece. Detail on the plant section is well done, with the tree bark in particular showing good detail. Nice angle use on the other aspects of the scene not yet mentioned such as the right sided pillar and the roof X supports.
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